I love you..
But I don't think you know,
I never wanted to let you go,
But here I am.. so alone.
Think about you day and night,
Never wanting you to leave my sight,
You always made my days so happy and bright,
But here I am.. so alone.
You were everything I could ask for,
And so, so much more.
But then there was that night,
When I chose what I thought was right..
But what I was thinking, I do not know..
And here I am.. so alone.
I ruined what I thought we had,
But did that even make you sad?
I can't even count the tears that I've cried..
Knowing.. that part of me has died,
Nor can I find the words to say..
To express the way I feel today,
Yet here I am.. so alone.


well this is my first poem that i submitted, and i really would like to you
what you think, just a simple "it's okay". "good",
"ehh, not very good" would work! any tips you have would be great
too.
 
Copyright © xomaloney16, All Rights Reserved